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  Jim oneohfournine

  Posted on 15 December 2022

  Caroline – your sound levels need a lot of work. The interview is very loud. others are quiet. there are lots of little problems. Stray black frames. Camera rumble before people speak.

  The dissolves don't work too well, looks like people are about to speak as you dissolve away. You need moments of room tone.

  Make sure you time your titles cards. Read them slowly as they play – some are too fast.

  Pls make changes and let;s look at it again in class tomorrow. Thanks, Jim

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